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... a short thought on a brutal january night...

‎... my spirit awakes suddenly from it's slumber. painful, excruciating... these chains aren't mine. where did they come from?



I feel the wind loosen... there is a storm ahead... but this time it's not my fight. The wind carries my soul upwards... and I look back to remember.


There I am.


As my father always said "Fuck-em if they can't take a joke."



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Comment by LizzyQ on January 11, 2011 at 2:17pm
Thanks!  I'm trying to write more these days... ;-)  -LQ-
Comment by Bubba Licious on January 10, 2011 at 3:21pm
Very nice.  I really liked the imagery.  Also that much is left out, letting the reader try to fill in the blanks.
Comment by LizzyQ on January 10, 2011 at 3:26am
yeah... ummm... I think you're right.  I'll defiantly be checking it out... prussian percussion...?  Sounds interesting...
Comment by mellowpuma on January 10, 2011 at 2:55am

Er. Well. Huh. So. Yeah. I'm pretty sure you need some cheering up or somesuch ... what I have at present is this: .  I recommend the prussion percussion:

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